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8 Tips to Make Your Writing Sound More Formal

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Here at ProofreadingPal , we get a lot of requests to “elevate tone,” “create a scholarly tone,” and “increase the formality,” and even “help this sound smart.” Truthfully, we cannot make you sound “smart.” There is no substitute for good ideas, but we can (and do) help you elevate your tone and make you sound like a bona fide professional-thinking person. Here are some handy tricks that you can use yourself.

• Avoid colloquial, informal words

I see a surprisingly high number of formal academic/business works that include words that are better left for the water cooler or over a spirited discussion of the merits of Michael Bay movies. Some words to avoid are “totally” (use “completely” instead), “basically” (just avoid it), “impact” (mostly as a verb. You shouldn’t say “that will impact me”), “wicked” (only use this when chatting in online games), and “cool” (this word can mean just about anything. Try to choose a more precise word). In general, avoid all slang words (e.g., rad, YOLO, heaps, guv). If in doubt, see if you could imagine your professor or boss using it. If not, avoid it.

• Proper use of “such as”

In formal writing, never use “like.” It’s probably the most commonly used feature of speech today for certain populations, but avoid it in formal writing. Compare:

Animals, like bears and tigers, are interesting. Animals, such as bears and tigers, are interesting.

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• Avoid contractions

Contractions such as “can’t,” “didn’t,” and “I’m” are purely a product of verbal speech. We speak in contractions, but the convention is that, for formal, non-fiction writing, we shouldn’t write in them. When writing a formal business letter or an academic essay, forego contractions. It’s easy to use the Word FIND function to seek them out and destroy them.

• Avoid clichés

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 This guide wouldn’t be complete without a look at some common practices that people use to make their writing more formal that don’t work. Here are a few practices we end up having to correct time and time again.

5. Don’t use passive voice . Passive voice is wordy, but being formal has nothing to do with wordiness.

• Don’t use thesaurus words you don’t fully understand. Big words don’t make your writing sound more formal, and this can backfire when you pick a word that doesn’t mean what you think it means. Take the sentence, “I saw a red dog walking down the street.” Easy, right? But using too much of a thesaurus might cause you to create: “I consulted a bloodshot mongrel marching down the highway,” which clearly is not what you intended.
• Don’t be wordy.

In all writing, wherever possible, brevity is the soul of wit. (Even I can’t avoid clichés, but at least that’s Shakespeare.) That means, always keep your prose as simple as possible . You may think, “The item that we are discussing could be the solution we are looking for to solve our problem,” sounds better because it’s long, but it’ll just annoy your reader. “That is the solution to our problem,” is better.

• Don’t mangle your sentences with third person.

Some professors still insist their students use third person to make their writing sound more formal, but (and always check with your professor first) style guides such as APA (and us) recommend you use first or second person to prevent passive voice and ambiguous language. Take: “The researcher applied a qualitative approach to the study” for example. Who is the researcher? You or someone else? This is ambiguous. It’s better to say, “I will take a qualitative approach to the study,” and this doesn’t sound any less formal.

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How to Write Better Essays

7 tips on how to make your essay better, how to become a better essay writer.

The best way to sum up how to write better essays is, “Make sure you’re answering the question.”

This sounds obvious, but you would be surprised how many students struggle with this.

From not understanding the prompt to poor research skills to off-topic body paragraphs, it’s easy for an essay to derail.

We’ve got seven tips for writing better essays that will help you avoid common mistakes and craft the best essays possible.

Here are our top tips for improving your essay writing skills.

Understand the Prompt or Research Question

The first step in your writing process is to fully understand the essay topic. If your professor gave you a prompt for your academic essay, spend some time analyzing it.

First, take note of whether you’re writing an expository or persuasive essay. The tone, structure, and word choice will differ between essay types.

Pay close attention to the wording of the prompt.

If your teacher wants you to “analyze” the effects of new technology in World War I, but you turn in a descriptive overview of the technology, you are not answering the question.

If they have given you a topic but no prompt, you’ll need to create a guiding question for your research.

Be specific in what you are trying to research, or you’ll end up overwhelmed with a topic that is too big in scope.

“Symbolism in modern literature” is too broad for a term paper, but “How does F. Scott Fitzgerald use symbolism in The Great Gatsby ?” is an achievable topic.

Take Excellent Notes

Once you understand exactly what your essay is about, you can begin the research phase. Create a strong note-taking system.

Write down any idea or quote you might want to use. Cite every note properly to save time on your citations and to avoid accidental plagiarism.

Once you have gathered your research, organize your notes into categories. This will help you plan the structure of your essay.

You’ll likely find that some of your research doesn’t fit into your essay once you start writing. That’s okay—it’s better to have too much information to support your argument than too little.

Write a Strong Thesis Statement

Possibly the most important step in essay writing is to craft a strong thesis statement. A thesis statement is a brief—usually single-sentence—explanation of what your essay is about.

The thesis statement guides the entire essay: every point you make should support your thesis.

A strong thesis is specific and long enough to address the major points of your essay.

In a persuasive or argumentative essay, your thesis should clearly establish the argument you are making.

Make an Outline

Once you have all your research, it’s easy to get overwhelmed. How do you turn the information into a cohesive essay?

Rather than writing an essay with no roadmap, an outline will keep you on track. An outline helps you organize your thoughts, plan your arguments, and sort your research.

A good outline saves you time, too! You can compile the relevant evidence in your notes before writing, so you don’t have to find that specific quote in the middle of essay writing.

An outline will also stop you from reading your finished essay and realizing you went completely off track.

With an outline, you can avoid finding paragraphs that don’t support your thesis right before you submit the essay.

Craft a Great Introduction

An academic essay needs a strong introductory paragraph.

The introduction is the first impression of your essay. It prepares the reader for what’s coming and gets them excited to read your paper.

A good introduction has three things:

• A hook (e.g. insightful statement, quote, interesting fact)
• Brief background information about the topic
• A thesis statement

Using this formula will help you write a strong introduction for your essay.

Have Original Ideas and Interpretations

The best academic writing advice a professor ever gave me was, “You’ve shown me what other people have said about the topic. I want to know what you think about the topic.”

Even a fact-heavy or data-heavy essay needs original ideas and interpretations. For every piece of information you cite, whether you quote or paraphrase it , offer original commentary.

Focus on insights, new interpretations, or even questions that you have. These are all ways to provide original ideas in your essay.

Proofread for Readability

A good essay is a proofread essay.

Readability, or how easy something is to read, has many factors. Spelling and grammar are important, but so is sentence structure, word choice , and other stylistic features.

Academic essays should be readable without being too simple. In general, aim for a readability score that is close to your grade level in school.

There are several ways to check readability scores, including using ProWritingAid’s Readability Report.

The quickest way to increase readability is to fix grammar and spelling mistakes . You can also raise the readability score by using more complex and compound-complex sentences.

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15 Words and Phrases That Will Make Your Essay Sound Smarter

As composing any piece of writing, it’s essential to use appropriate vocabulary to make your essay stand out. Plain language sounds boring and unappealing, so it’s really important to know how to write effective papers. Not only do some words can help you persuade the reader, grab their attention, but they can also make you sound smarter.

“It’s always the language, words and phrases that you use in your writing that make your paper sound smart. Your paper can be well-researched and insightful, but it won’t stand out if it’s written in plain, boring language,” says Adam Simon, a college student and contributor to LegitWritingServices essay writing service review and education blog.

So enjoy our list of 15 words and phrases that will be of great help to make you paper sound smarter. 

In other words

When to Use: To paraphrase something in a simpler manner, thus making it easier to understand;

Exemplary Sentence: Writing an essay isn’t as black as it’s painted. In other words , once you learn the general tips, all is left is the practice.

That is to say

When to Use: To provide additional explanation to your previous point, or to add information to sound more accurate;

Exemplary Sentence: To start writing an essay one needs to do research. That is to say , one should search for materials, read them, examine and take notes.

To that end

When to Use: A synonymous phrase meaning ‘in order to’ or ‘so’;

Exemplary Sentence: He wanted to get straight A’s. To that end , he has been mastering his writing skills recently.

Supporting points with additional info

And, and, and. Using ‘and’ throughout your essay to add points won’t make your paper sound smarter. There are tons of awesome expressions and here are the top of them.

Furthermore

When to Use: To provide additional points, used at the beginning of a sentence (don’t forget a comma);

Exemplary Sentence: Furthermore , you should proofread and polish your paper before handing out the final variant.

When to Use: To add additional information, or offering some ideas that support your point of view in a similar manner;

Exemplary Sentence: Planning the writing process is vital to avoid writer’s block and craft a well-thought paper. Likewise , it is essential to write an outline, so that your essay is well-structured.

Another key thing to remember

When to Use: If you have already overused the word ‘also’, it’s high time to use its synonymous phrase ‘another key thing to remember’;

Exemplary Sentence: When writing an introduction, make sure you hook the reader’s attention and arouse their interest. Another key thing to remember is that crafting an introduction last thing is often more effective, as you have already had the perfect grasp of the chosen topic.

Not only...but also

When to Use: To present two ideas while the latter is often more surprising than the former one. Keep in mind the inversion moment as well;

Exemplary Sentence: Not only should you support your topic idea with several additional ones, but you should also provide great examples to underpin your point of view.

Coupled with

When to Use: To examine two or more arguments at a time;

Exemplary Sentence: He soon realized that choosing the topic he was passionate about, coupled with following all the academic rules and standards, was the key to getting top grades for the essay.

Expressing contrast

It’s essential to present contrasting opinions in argumentative essays, as well as in any essay if you want to develop your point of view and make it sound strong. That is why, here are some phrases to use.

When to Use: To provide a contrasting point of view;

Exemplary Sentence: Putting off your essay until the last minute isn’t the greatest idea. However , there are some students who claim that they do better when they’re pressed for time.

When to Use: To give a contrasting point; often used at the beginning of a sentence for better emphasis;

Exemplary Sentence: Purchasing essays online is regarded as cheating by the majority of people. Yet some believe there is nothing wrong in asking for a bit of assistance with their papers.

On the other hand

When to Use: Often used along with another contrasting point, for example, there are two different interpretations of the same idea ‘on the one hand’ and ‘on the other hand’;

Exemplary Sentence: Crafting an essay may seem like the worst and the most daunting task. On the other hand , once you’ve finished it, you feel satisfied and have this pleasant sense of accomplishment.

Highlighting important information

Emphasizing particular points in your essay also require some useful vocabulary.

When to Use: A synonymous expression to ‘particularly’ or ‘significantly’ to highlight peculiar information;

Exemplary Sentence: After reading this article, one can notably improve their vocabulary and make their writing sound smarter.

Importantly

When to Use: Another synonym to the word ‘significantly’, suggesting a special meaning to the point;

Exemplary Sentence: Polishing her paper with high-brow vocabulary affected her grades importantly.

Providing examples

You won’t surprise you professor ‘for example’, while the following expression will boost your writing skills.

To give an illustration

When to Use: To provide an example that will best illustrate your point of view

Exemplary Sentence: To give an illustration of what I mean, let’s have a look at the final effective phrase to use.

All things considered

When to Use: In other words, ‘taking everything into account’

Exemplary Sentence: All things considered , writing a good essay may be time- and energy-consuming; it may require scrutinizing tons of academic rules and standards; it can be pressuring and scary. However, following some useful tips can ease the whole composing process. To give an illustration of what I mean, try enriching your vocabulary with these 15 words and phrases and see how smarter your paper sounds now.

Summarizing

If an effective essay was a building, it would have a great foundation (an introduction and a conclusion). An introduction grabs the reader’s attention and guides straight to the main body, while a conclusion has the final say that is supposed to leave an aftertaste. For this reason, it’s essential to use persuasive vocabulary when summarizing your ideas.

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Four Ways to Make Your Writing Sound Prettier

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Some writers write prose that sounds good. The writing makes you want to read it slow, as if you could let the words melt on your tongue.

I once read some of Faulkner's Sartoris out loud to Liz. Faulkner is known for his long, convoluted sentences and huge jumps in the narrative. Liz said, “Eugh. That's an intense sentence. Do you even understand that?”

“Kind of,” I said. “Not really. But it's beautiful.” The thing is, I didn't need to understand it. The way the words sounded was enough.

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Here's some vocabulary for you. The study of the sounds of words and sentences is called phonoaesthetics. Thus, someone who studies the sounds of words would then be called a phonoaesthete (isn't that a fun word!). And when the words and sentences sound pleasant together, it's called euphony—as opposed to cacophony.

So that's our vocab for the day (or week):

• Phonoaesthetics – the study of the sounds of words whether pleasant or unpleasant
• Euphony – Pleasant sounding words and sentences
• Cacophony – Unpleasant sounding words and sentences

How To Make Your Writing Sound Euphonic

The question, then, is how do we make our writing sound more interesting? Here are four suggestions:

1. Alliteration

Alliteration is the repetition of the first letter of the word throughout a sentence. Alliteration gives a sentence flow. If each letter were a color, it would be like painting with a palette of corresponding colors. Alliteration smooths out hard edges and creates smooth lines. Here's a quick example.

Tommy took the truck to the train station.

Lot's of repeated T's there. Below is an example from Herman Melville's Moby Dick . See if you can spot the alliteration.

Um-m. So he must. I do deem it now a most meaning thing, that that old Greek, Prometheus, who made men, they say, should have been a blacksmith, and animated them with fire.

Did you see it? Right, the M's throughout the sentence and a few D's in the beginning. Try reading it out loud. See how well the sentence flows. Melville used alliteration all over the place, and he is considered one of the great American masters.

2. Consonance

Consonance is the repetition of consonant sounds inside of a word. The repetition of consonants (which are the opposite of vowels), especially hard consonants like T's and K's, tend to create cacophony rather than euphony. Here's another example from Moby Dick. It's a bit harder.

Ere the Pequod's weedy hull rolls side by side with the barnacled hulls of the leviathan…

Did you see it? I'll show the example again with the repeated consonants highlighted.

Ere the Pequod's weedy hu ll ro ll s side by side with the barnac l ed hu ll s of the l eviathan…

Now do you hear all those L sounds? Read it again really slow and you'll see how the consonance ties the sentence together beautifully. The L's almost make you feel rolly, as if you are on the deck of a ship lilting in sea.

3. Assonance

Assonance is the repetition of vowel sounds inside of the word. Theoretically, assonance can create mood, give you like airy feelings if you're repeating ae and ee sounds, and deep soulful feelings when repeating oe sounds. Finding assonance is a bit harder still, but here's another example from Moby Dick .

And as though not a soul were nigh him…

Did you see it? I'll show it again with highlights.

And as th ou gh not a s ou l were nigh him…

Here, Melville repeats the ough sound, as in dough and mow. Theoretically, the emphasis of the ough sound should make you feel more expansive and soulful. However, I'm not very good at using assonance so I can't tell you for sure. You might experiment with it.

4. The Single BEST Way To Make Your Writing Sound Better

The best way to make your writing more euphonic is to read beautiful writing and read it slow.

Here's why. Authors don't approach the blank page thinking, “Oh, I think I'll focus on assonance today. Hmm… maybe I should play with Alliteration.” No. They do it instinctively, and the best way to hone your instincts is through careful reading.

Take a page or even just a paragraph of a piece of literature and read it slowly over five to ten minutes. Sound the words out as you go. Read aloud so that you can hear the words as well as visualize them.

(And then practice writing beautifully yourself.)

Reading, more than anything else, will hone your instincts for phonoaesthetics.

PRACTICE For our practice time today, why don't you use the chance to start something for the “Show Off” Contest . The prompt is Christmas . First, follow the link and pick a random passage of Moby Dick , and read for five minutes . Choose just one or two paragraphs. Pay special attention to the sounds of Melville's prose. Let the rhythms sink into you. Then, just write. Write about your favorite Christmas memory. Write about your worst Christmas. Write about the best gift you ever received and what made it special. As you write, listen to the sounds and let your mind drift away. Focus on sound not meaning. Write for ten minutes . Post your practice in the comments when you're done.

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Christmas had passed in a whirlwind as we prepared to marry on the twenty-seventh of December. The greenery was still hanging, though only by a thin thread, in the candlelit sanctuary that cold winter evening. Friends and family found their way through the frigid night to join us in the warmth of the church that had long been the spiritual and social center of that small community.

The flicker of flame illuminated the colorful bouquets beautifully arranged in delicate fingers. Voices soulfully singing the love songs of the ages joined the prayers of the saints in a symphony of adoration rivaling the likes of Solomon himself.

The pull of gravity lost all power as she entered the room. All heads turned towards her like sunflowers worshiping the sun. Galileo would be unable to theorize the unexplainable force we all felt that winter night thirty one years ago.

Light reflected off her softly veiled eyes as she moved down the aisle in her father’s arm. All spectrum of color melted into shadow as the gown of white cascaded from her beauty. Blonde tresses framed her loveliness. A loveliness that I knew seeped deep into her beautiful soul.

We met at the altar, in awe of the gift of love; the gift of God.

Wow, Tom. This is a bit different from you, and you do a great job of it. You did a great job weaving alliteration in there through out. It makes it more readable, doesn’t it?

Like this: “the spiritual and social center of that small community.” This sentence is fairly boring in regards to its meaning, but the alliteration gives it flow.

Here’s another quick exercise for you. You’re a musician. Read this aloud again: “Voices soulfully singing the love songs of the ages joined the prayers of the saints in a symphony of adoration rivaling the likes of Solomon himself. ”

How does that sound to you? I’m wondering if that’s a few too many S’s. Of course, I’m the one who told you to do it, so if there are, it’s my fault.

You know about the Inklings? The writing group Tolkien and CS Lewis were part of. They met at a pub in Oxford, and sometimes they would read this one female author I forget the name of who overused alliteration. They had contests to see who could read the longest without cracking up. When I heard this story I got all panicky and thought, am I overusing alliteration? Like all tools, you’ve got to find the right use for them. Use alliteration but be aware of when it can seem silly.

I think you did a great job though. Alliteration can pass on a mood of awe, perfect for this story. It must have been a good “Christmas.” Thanks Tom.

Haha! Yes, that one sentence reminds me of the kid’s tongue twister, “She sells sea shells by the seashore.” What if I just deleted the first part of that sentence and started with “The love songs…”?

Ha, right. Yeah, I think that would work. Good idea.

Very, very, very nice and thoughtful piece. I especially liked your “All heads turned towards her like sunflowers worshipping the sun” and “the pull of gravity lost all power as she entered the room.” So much emotion and color in such a short piece.

I am so glad I discovered this article of yours. Writing is simply a difficult task for me but please review my short paragraph. I am in the process of revision for my English standard grade exam.- I pondered, desperately pleading the hesitant burning ball of gas to reveal its strange yet comforting rays of light. The warm,orange glow that sinks into my skin during the summer time. Let the weariness of adventure of the winter time pass as it takes along with it the left overs of Christmas past.

Christmas day, 1989. The television tunes to a macabre and unfortunately pleasing gift. The Caucescu’s bloody and broken bodies lay, folded backwards. A sense of release and relief is felt by those who poor and starving have over the past 20 years toiled endlessly to grow food they cannot eat, craft merchandise they cannot afford, and it’s amazing to see how much joy can be derived out of someone else’s demise. The show trial went for 90 minutes. The old man, exhausted, throws his hat on the table in resignation. Much to their protest their hands are now tied behind their backs. This is the nadir. The soldiers have no pity on them. As one exclaims, no one will help them now. Their only last request – to be killed together. Mercifully that last request is granted. Rounds of bullets send an impenetrable cloud of dirt and debris into the air, and only when the smoke clears can we see the end result. Elaine and Nikola lay,

dead. – together.

[Hook] x4 Got the club going up on a Tuesday Got yo girl in the cut and she choosy

[Verse] Working Monday night, on the corner flipping hard Made at least three thousand, on the Boulevard I’ve been working graveyard, shifts every other weekend Ain’t got no fucking time to party on the weekend I’ve been flipping in the house, making juugs on the highway I’ve been riding out of state, making money like my way I don’t think that I should dance, I’m just gon have another drink I’m doing my stance, you know my Molly pink I’ve got the loudest of the loud, you know my gas stink My P.O. think I’m in the house, don’t give a damn about what she think

[Bridge] It ain’t no way no how I made it on my own, I made my own style I don’t think that I should stay, you know I gotta go You moving too fast, don’t want to take it slow

[Hook] x4 Got the club going up on a Tuesday. Got yo girl in the cut and she choosy

[Verse] Working Monday night, on the corner flipping hard Made at least three thousand, on the Boulevard I’ve been working graveyard, shifts every other weekend Ain’t got no fucking time to party on the weekend I’ve been flipping in the house, making juugs on the highway I’ve been riding out of state, making money like my way I don’t think that I should dance, I’m just gon have another drink I’m doing my stance, you know my Molly pink. I’ve got the loudest of the loud, you know my gas stink My P.O. think I’m in the house, don’t give a damn about what she think

Jon Bon Jovi – Blaze Of Glory

I wake up in the morning And I raise my weary head I got an old coat for a pillow And the earth was last night’s bed I don’t know where I’m going Only God knows where I’ve been I’m a devil on the run A six gun lover A candle in the wind When you’re brought into this world They say you’re born in sin Well at least they gave me something I didn’t have to steal or have to win Well they tell me that I’m wanted Yeah I’m a wanted man I’m colt in your stable I’m what Cain was to Abel Mister catch me if you can I’m going down in a blaze of glory Take me now but know the truth I’m going down in a blaze of glory Lord I never drew first But I drew first blood I’m no one’s son Call me young gun You ask about my consience And I offer you my soul You ask If I’ll grow to be a wise man Well I ask if I’ll grow old You ask me if I known love And what it’s like to sing songs in the rain Well,I’ve seen love come And I’ve seen it shot down I’ve seen it die in vain Shot down in a blaze of glory Take me now but know the truth ‘Cause I’m going down in a blaze of glory Lord I never drew first But I drew first blood I’m the devil’s son Call me young gun Each night I go to bed I pray the Lord my soul to keep No I ain’t looking for forgiveness But before I’m six foot deep Lord,I got to ask a favor And I’ll hope you’ll understand ‘Cause I’ve lived life to the fullest Let the boy die like a man Staring down the bullet Let me make my final stand Shot down in a blaze of glory Take me now but know the truth I’m going out in a blaze of glory Lord I never drew first But I drew first blood and I’m no one’s son Call me young gun I’m a young gun

Some times while writing a chapter a song will play in my head this is one that’s playing today, as I near the books end.

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